Good morning, my name is Sinahi Manzo Gaspar, and I am representative of Samsung Electronics Mexico.
I am a general asistant. However, I am working in the sales area, and I develop everything sales in the company, and I look for new buyers, around the World.
Samsung Electronics México has stayed for 12 years here in México. However, It is a Korean company, It has increased of 7 or 10 % for year in average. The company has entusiastic and hard working people.
Actualy, the company´s president is Mauricio Silis, Adriana Zapata is the General Manager, and Marco Antonio Guerrero is principal representative of Samsung Electronics in Korea. I can say that three people have made a good work for have a posicionate in the World.
In the last 3 years, the company has increased of 10 %, specialy in White line. In 2007, It increased 10%, this number is equals to 10,000 million dollars, but not Only It increased in White line, the cell line is the best in cellphones at the moment.
At this moment, We are looking for introduce in the Autralian Mark a new product, this product is a cell phone that can recive signals over the World, and you don´t need call to your telephonin company.
Finally Samsung Electronics wants to be one the company with philosofy in each thing that makes, I looking foward that the presentation has been informative in his totaly.
I am a general asistant. However, I am working in the sales area, and I develop everything sales in the company, and I look for new buyers, around the World.
Samsung Electronics México has stayed for 12 years here in México. However, It is a Korean company, It has increased of 7 or 10 % for year in average. The company has entusiastic and hard working people.
Actualy, the company´s president is Mauricio Silis, Adriana Zapata is the General Manager, and Marco Antonio Guerrero is principal representative of Samsung Electronics in Korea. I can say that three people have made a good work for have a posicionate in the World.
In the last 3 years, the company has increased of 10 %, specialy in White line. In 2007, It increased 10%, this number is equals to 10,000 million dollars, but not Only It increased in White line, the cell line is the best in cellphones at the moment.
At this moment, We are looking for introduce in the Autralian Mark a new product, this product is a cell phone that can recive signals over the World, and you don´t need call to your telephonin company.
Finally Samsung Electronics wants to be one the company with philosofy in each thing that makes, I looking foward that the presentation has been informative in his totaly.
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develop everything sales - unclear
increased of - increase by. Please change it every time to by.
actualmente = currently, not actually
have made a good work for have a posicionate in the World. - have done good work to have a ????
What do you mean by posicionate?
What is white line?
for introduce - to introduce. Remember only the preposition "to" can be followed by a simple verb. All other prepositions require the -ing form.
telephonin - telephone
one the company with philosofy in each thing that makes - unclear
What do you mean by philosophy?
I looking foward that the presentation has been informative in his totaly. I hope the presentation has been informative.
Looking forward talks about the future.
Really, you have only a few errors that would interfere with comprehension, but I'm sure you want to improve the presentation.
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