Dears members of the board of trustees:
We are writing in response about your desition, and all the workers disagree with the sale of Hershey Foods.
Firstly, the town and the company are closely linked.
Tourists visit the town because they believe the "chocolate town" is magic.
I you decide to sell, you will cut a lot of jobs creating economic disaster for the town. Also Milton Hershey would never have sold.
The interest generated by Hershey´s $5.6 bn gift is enough to finance a school that is essential for continuing to educate our children.
Finally, many people in the trust are not from the town, because they have lived all their life in this town and they do not understand that the residents are protecting a "way of life".
We look foward to an aswer of you.
Sincerely
The principal commit of workers of the company.
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about your desition - to your decision
Firstly the town - Firstly, ....
thye are join - they are joined. But, really, this means exactly the same thing that you just stated, so omit it.
that is magic and that was created the "chocolate town". - the "chocolate town" is magic
Opposite, Change to "On the other hand,"
jobs created - jobs, creating
school, that is essential for continue to learn to our children.
Leave out the comma.
that is essential for continuing to educate our children.
Finally many people in the trust are not from the town, because they have lived all their life in this town and they do not understand that the residents are protecting a "way of life".
Finally,...town. Because they have not lived all their life in this town, they....
foward an - forward to an
Sincerely,
Your letter should be signed with names of the workers.
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